Squee! Glad you liked it... reading it in one session - wow, you get props!
It was very important to me that my John be balanced, so yes, he *does* miss the mark occasionally (and I think more and more often as time went on, too). And I struggled with the severity of the "trouble" Dean and Sam got into, especially with respect to John's reactions, so I'm very happy that that worked for you.
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Date: 2008-04-28 12:37 pm (UTC)It was very important to me that my John be balanced, so yes, he *does* miss the mark occasionally (and I think more and more often as time went on, too). And I struggled with the severity of the "trouble" Dean and Sam got into, especially with respect to John's reactions, so I'm very happy that that worked for you.
Thanks for reading!