i like the way you have Bobby react to 'batchelor'
Yep. I actually wrote that scene - complete with Bobby's reaction - just before we learned that his tragic past was a wife who died. I was so proud!
I thought about the pager (it actually appears in some other fics, where Sam and Dean both carry them) because I think that John would have been an early adopter of any tech that allowed them to stay in contact while also mobile.
you pack in a lot of detail
What a lovely ending!
Thank you! I'm still surprised by how dense some of these chapters are. When I go back and re-read, I think, "Dude. I wrote that?"
And thanks, too, about the ending. I knew the moment I was writing toward, so when I got there, I was so pleased that it felt right.
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Date: 2008-04-18 11:42 pm (UTC)i like the way you have Bobby react to 'batchelor'
Yep. I actually wrote that scene - complete with Bobby's reaction - just before we learned that his tragic past was a wife who died. I was so proud!
I thought about the pager (it actually appears in some other fics, where Sam and Dean both carry them) because I think that John would have been an early adopter of any tech that allowed them to stay in contact while also mobile.
you pack in a lot of detail
What a lovely ending!
Thank you! I'm still surprised by how dense some of these chapters are. When I go back and re-read, I think, "Dude. I wrote that?"
And thanks, too, about the ending. I knew the moment I was writing toward, so when I got there, I was so pleased that it felt right.