Very well written! The party really reminded me of 'Cruel Intentions', and I thought with so much going on there you handled the scenes very well and kept it interesting and on track as far as Dean goes! I liked that he "tried" to help Kelly, even if she didn't want his help.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2007-12-18 03:46 pm (UTC)Loved the brotherly chat at the end!
Nicely done!