Well, I just finished the entire story in one sitting and I've got to say I enjoyed it. I really liked your take on John. Admittedly, a lot of the time I wanted to smack him, but you portrayed him as complex and layered, even if he kind of missed to point of parenting at times.
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Date: 2008-06-29 09:51 pm (UTC)