Well, you read the draft and liked it... which is great feedback, but I'm looking for some more detailed con/crit. I've tweaked it a great deal since you saw it, but didn't get to tighten it up by much.
Actually, I was going to email you anyway to ask what other scenes/sketches you think you'll have. I'm trying to figure out where to put the links to the art, and I'm finding a lot skewed toward the beginning.... there are a couple places I can use some of the art, but knowing what else is coming will help me space the artwork out in the story.
I'll happily send you the revised version, though!
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Date: 2008-06-11 10:07 pm (UTC)Actually, I was going to email you anyway to ask what other scenes/sketches you think you'll have. I'm trying to figure out where to put the links to the art, and I'm finding a lot skewed toward the beginning.... there are a couple places I can use some of the art, but knowing what else is coming will help me space the artwork out in the story.
I'll happily send you the revised version, though!