I like your John, even though he's not the John we see later
No, he's not, but I hope the seeds of the John we see are there - I worked hard to show that he's turning harder. But I think the real turning point for John was finding out that Sam knew about hunting.
Anyway.
I also like how Dean is just such a *boy* in this. Sammy is still figuring himself out, but Dean is so responsible already.
Heh. Thanks. I surprised myself with my wee!Sam - at first I thought I'd barely be able to come up with anything interesting from his perspective, and suddenly - BAM. Whole sections and chapters from his little mixed-up logical head. And Dean is right on that cusp where he's still kid enough to do some dumbass things, but adult enough to know when he's effing it up royal.
SO GLAD you enjoyed it!
Oh - and do ask Hari to draw that picture! The description is in Chapter 6, I think.
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No, he's not, but I hope the seeds of the John we see are there - I worked hard to show that he's turning harder. But I think the real turning point for John was finding out that Sam knew about hunting.
Anyway.
I also like how Dean is just such a *boy* in this. Sammy is still figuring himself out, but Dean is so responsible already.
Heh. Thanks. I surprised myself with my wee!Sam - at first I thought I'd barely be able to come up with anything interesting from his perspective, and suddenly - BAM. Whole sections and chapters from his little mixed-up logical head. And Dean is right on that cusp where he's still kid enough to do some dumbass things, but adult enough to know when he's effing it up royal.
SO GLAD you enjoyed it!
Oh - and do ask Hari to draw that picture! The description is in Chapter 6, I think.