1. - what a true sounding look at what probably happened then.
With a guilty look at the shotgun Dad had leaned against the end table, Dean grabbed the room key and stepped outside, locking the door behind him.
Perfect nod to what we saw in that ep.
2. - possibly my favourite part. I love the teacher here and I love how much Dean tries to avoid participating.
(Dean had helpfully pointed out to her that if she wasn’t supposed to sing and she was supposed to minimize talking, perhaps she shouldn’t complain to anyone who’d listen.)
That cracked me up no end.
3. - loved the way you wrote the accents. I can't write accents, so I'm always in awe of people who do. This feels very true to what Dean's first crush could be like - and how it effects him. I also love that he beat up the bullies. Yeah, he had an ulterior motive, but he still did it.
4. - Wonderful exploration of his thoughts.
5. - definitely something that could happen.
This is going to my mems, and I'm going to recc it.
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1. - what a true sounding look at what probably happened then.
With a guilty look at the shotgun Dad had leaned against the end table, Dean grabbed the room key and stepped outside, locking the door behind him.
Perfect nod to what we saw in that ep.
2. - possibly my favourite part. I love the teacher here and I love how much Dean tries to avoid participating.
(Dean had helpfully pointed out to her that if she wasn’t supposed to sing and she was supposed to minimize talking, perhaps she shouldn’t complain to anyone who’d listen.)
That cracked me up no end.
3. - loved the way you wrote the accents. I can't write accents, so I'm always in awe of people who do. This feels very true to what Dean's first crush could be like - and how it effects him. I also love that he beat up the bullies. Yeah, he had an ulterior motive, but he still did it.
4. - Wonderful exploration of his thoughts.
5. - definitely something that could happen.
This is going to my mems, and I'm going to recc it.