Really enjoyed those, and I don't read a great deal of Snapefic!

Particularly liked the Yorkshire vocabulary and felt that nothing jarred there. It does set me thinking: I wonder if part of Snape's animosity towards Neville is to do with the fact that Neville is a (relatively) rare Northerner like him (see not just the actor but the reference to "being dropped off Blackpool Pier") so any feelings Snape would have had, positive or negative, would have been intensified through a heightened degree of identification.