calling betas!

[gwendolyngrace]

Hi, all.

So, my big_bang post goes up on June 26th. I've been tweaking it fairly continuously for a while and I'm fairly happy with it as-is, but it's big and major and I'm feeling wibblish.

It's in the hands of one beta, but I know she's having a really tough couple weeks and I'd love another opinion before posting.

It's long - 43,000 words - but it reads fairly quickly. Anyone up for a sneak peek?

Comments

[sazzlette.livejournal.com]

Yeah I can do detailed crit, that's why I'm offering :) Just let me know how harsh you want me to be.

Well, this is the other reason I wanna see the revised version, to get more of an idea of what scenes I definitely want to illustrate.