calling betas!

[gwendolyngrace]

Hi, all.

So, my big_bang post goes up on June 26th. I've been tweaking it fairly continuously for a while and I'm fairly happy with it as-is, but it's big and major and I'm feeling wibblish.

It's in the hands of one beta, but I know she's having a really tough couple weeks and I'd love another opinion before posting.

It's long - 43,000 words - but it reads fairly quickly. Anyone up for a sneak peek?

Comments

[gwendolyngrace.livejournal.com]

Well, you read the draft and liked it... which is great feedback, but I'm looking for some more detailed con/crit. I've tweaked it a great deal since you saw it, but didn't get to tighten it up by much.

Actually, I was going to email you anyway to ask what other scenes/sketches you think you'll have. I'm trying to figure out where to put the links to the art, and I'm finding a lot skewed toward the beginning.... there are a couple places I can use some of the art, but knowing what else is coming will help me space the artwork out in the story.

I'll happily send you the revised version, though!

[sazzlette.livejournal.com]

Yeah I can do detailed crit, that's why I'm offering :) Just let me know how harsh you want me to be.

Well, this is the other reason I wanna see the revised version, to get more of an idea of what scenes I definitely want to illustrate.